Summary for studio visit
Claudia Tait: The skin color can incorporate a natural style(paper skin?), such as hand-painting in SP, instead of relying on material textures.
Caitlin Craggs: The soundtrack needs more design to better align with the storyline and enhance the audio atmosphere.
Yulia Ruditskaya: Branches (snakes) should be a special symbol, appearing at key moments.
Rafeal Castelblanco: It’s possible to reduce some elements and focus on lighting effects and colors, which evolve along with the progression of the plot.
Everyone is asking: What is the symbolism of the snake? The two characters need more interaction at the beginning to let the audience understand their relationship. What happen to them after falling into the water, and why did the girl turn into a ball?
Characters
Animatic
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